July 17, 2025

The Depths – Part 21

The Odyssey’s hull creaked under the strain of subspace turbulence—deep groans vibrating through the bridge like distant thunder underwater. A dim red warning light pulsed from engineering, illuminating the worried faces of the sole engineer in rhythmic flashes.

"Status on the pressure fields?" Captain Winter barked, eyes locked onto the spatial readouts that flickered with erratic intensity.

Lt. Mira Daan didn’t hesitate. "Fluctuating, sir. It's not behaving like any natural turbulence we’ve catalogued. The readings are resonant... almost patterned."

"Patterned?" Dr. Elara Kane leaned over Mira’s station. "You’re saying it's... deliberate?"

Before Mira could respond, the bridge dimmed—then darkened entirely, save for the main view screen. The two unknown contacts hovered in silent formation, their sleek forms jagged with anomalies that defied conventional physics. It wasn’t just pursuit. It was choreography - or so it seemed...

“They’re shadowing us,” said Helm Officer Zeke, his voice low. “Four o'clock and eight. No deviation. They're responding to our movements, but not initiating contact. It's like... they’re studying us.

A chill spread through the bridge like frost across glass.

Winter stood, silhouette sharp against the starscape. “Ensign Ryland, run the encryption again. What did that transmission mean?”

Ryland looked pale as he brought it up. "Sir… it's not language. It’s tonal. Like subspace harmonics. Almost a song."

"A song," Kane repeated slowly, as if tasting the word. "Or a warning."

Suddenly, the Odyssey shuddered—not from impact, but from pressure. Space warped briefly around them, a pulse pushing outward like a heartbeat. One of the contacts blinked out of view... only to reappear closer, too close.

“Captain,” Mira said quietly, “it’s inside the turbulence.”

Winter turned to Engineering. "Divert power to the shields. Prep evasive maneuvers. Zeke—do not jump us yet. They want us to run.”

Zeke’s jaw tightened. “So what do we do?”

Winter narrowed his eyes. The hum of the Odyssey’s core resonated like a tensioned string. Around them, reality flexed and rippled, a silent battlefield unfolding in the unseen layers of space.

“We don’t run,” Winter said. “Not yet.”

 

*****

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February 13, 2025

The Depths - Part 20

The Odyssey's crew took their stations, the familiar hum of the ship's systems a comforting backdrop to the tense atmosphere. The ship's doctor, Dr. Elara Kane, entered the bridge and called all hands to attention. As Captain Winter strode onto the bridge, his presence commanding and resolute, he rounded the left corner to his large black padded chair in the center of the front of the bridge.

"Crew, at ease. You may be seated," Winter ordered, his voice steady. The crew promptly sat down and commenced the undocking procedures with practiced efficiency. The Odyssey smoothly disengaged from the space station and launched into the vast expanse of space.

"Set course for Sector 1271," Winter commanded, his eyes fixed on the view screen ahead.

"Course plotted and laid in, Captain," Helm Officer Zeke reported, his hands dancing over the controls.

"Engage at Translight 9," Winter ordered, his gaze unwavering.

"Aye, Captain. Translight 9," Zeke confirmed, activating the ship's faster-than-light drive. The Odyssey surged forward, disappearing into the distance in a flash of light.

The bridge settled into a brief moment of calm as the ship sped through the cosmos. However, the tranquility was short-lived. The Sensors Officer, Lt. Mira Daan, noticed something unusual on her screen.

"Captain, we're detecting strange sensor echoes," she reported, her brow furrowing in concentration. "They're appearing in different corners of the sensors screen."

Winter leaned forward in his chair, his interest piqued. "Can you identify the source?"

Lt. Daan's fingers flew over her console as she analyzed the data. "Sir, we've got two other ships – both unknown – at our four and eight o'clock directions. They’re closing in on us."

"Are they attempting communication?" Winter asked, his tone sharp.

"Negative, Captain. No communications from the sensor contacts," she replied, her voice tense.

Just then, the Communications Officer, Ensign Ryland, turned to Winter with a shocked expression. "Sir, we've just received a new long-range message. It's... it's heavily encrypted."

Winter's eyes narrowed. "Patch it through to my console. Let's see what we've got."

As the message decrypted, Winter felt a chill run down his spine. Whatever lay ahead, it was clear that their journey to Sector 1271 would be far from uneventful.

*****

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February 6, 2025

The Depths - Part 19

Ops sat in a padded chair, the sterile ambiance of the therapist's office a stark contrast to the chaos that had consumed their lives. Beside Ops, the therapist adjusted the camera, ready to document the debriefing session. The memories were still fresh, the horrors they had faced on the space station looming large in their minds.

"We never thought we'd make it out alive," Ops began, their voice tinged with a mixture of disbelief and relief. "The malevolent force stalking us seemed more interested in learning about us than killing us. It was almost as though it was studying us, testing us. We could never identify who or what it was, but it seemed...partially organic."

The camera whirred softly, capturing every word, every nuance of Ops' expression. The crew had been stalked relentlessly, their every move shadowed by an unseen adversary. Yet, in a strange twist of fate, the force had lost interest in their demise, allowing them a fleeting chance to regroup and escape.

"Getting back to the Odyssey was a miracle," Ops continued, their gaze distant as they recalled the harrowing journey. "Something about that space station interfered with our phasing tech. We couldn't just phase back; we had to fight our way to the hangar bay. The stench of death and burnt metal still lingers in my nostrils."

Ops took a deep breath, steadying themselves. The therapist nodded encouragingly, understanding the weight of the trauma that still hung over the crew.

Captain Aaen Winter stood before Fleet Admiral Williamson, his expression a mix of determination and exhaustion. "How soon can my crew be reunited and back on the Odyssey, Admiral?" he asked, his voice firm despite the weariness that seeped into his bones. "And how soon can we depart for Sector 1271?"

Fleet Admiral Williamson regarded Winter with a steely gaze, the weight of command evident in his eyes. "The crew is being assembled as we speak, Captain. The Odyssey will be ready for departure within the next 24 hours. You've all been through hell, but your mission is far from over."

Winter nodded, the resolve in his heart burning brighter. The Odyssey was more than just a ship; it was their lifeline, their hope for survival. Whatever lay ahead in Sector 1271, they would face it together, united by the trials they had endured.

*****

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January 30, 2025

The Depths - Part 18

Captain Aaen Winter's muscles tensed as he navigated the narrow maintenance crawlway, his every sense attuned to the ominous silence that pressed down on him in chillingly gloomy fog. The distant echo of the Operations officer's frantic footsteps faded into the background, replaced by the persistent thrum of the ship's failing systems.

The crawlway was a claustrophobic labyrinth, its cold metal walls closing in on him. Sweat dripped down his face as he crawled, his breath coming in shallow, controlled bursts. He couldn't afford to make a sound. The malevolent force stalking them was relentless, its motives as inscrutable as the darkness that enveloped him.

Emerging into a dimly lit corridor on a lower deck, Winter paused, listening. The air was thick with the stench of death and the acrid tang of burnt metal. He pressed himself against the wall, his ears straining for any sign of movement. Every shadow seemed to conceal a lurking threat, every creak of the ship's hull a potential harbinger of doom.

SpaceFleet Command, orbiting somewhere far above the chaos, was throwing everything they had into tracking down the Odyssey. The search party they'd deployed scoured the area, desperate to find any trace of Winter and his crew. But the malevolent force seemed to have other plans, hunting them with a calculated ferocity that defied comprehension.

Winter's mind flicked back to the Armory he'd left behind, its contents scattered and broken in an ungodly mess of technological carnage. The carnage he'd witnessed was unlike anything he'd ever seen. This was no ordinary adversary—they were facing something beyond their understanding, a threat that could decimate them with ease, yet...

Moving with the precision of a seasoned special operative, Winter advanced through the corridor - only wishing he were a special operative. The feeling of being watched was palpable, a constant, gnawing presence at the back of his mind. He couldn't afford to let fear paralyze him, and was struggling not to. His crew needed him to stay sharp, to find a way to survive this unholy nightmare.

As he rounded a corner, Winter caught sight of movement ahead. He froze, his hand instinctively reaching for his sidearm. The corridor stretched out before him, a silent, oppressive tunnel. Every nerve in his body was on edge, ready for whatever lay ahead - or so he assumed...

*****

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January 16, 2025

The Depths - Part 17

Fighting through the gripping, disorienting panic. . . The corridor around him proved an abyss of thick darkness with only the narrow beam of his tactical flashlight piercing the otherwise impenetrable chilling unknown. The unsettling growls reverberated through the corridor, a chilling reminder of the unthinkable peril stalking him. 

Aaen’s breaths come in frantic gasps, each inhalation a struggle against his racing heart and the overwhelming sense of impending doom and death. His rifle feels like a fragile lifeline, shaking in his trembling arms. The darkness beyond the flashlight’s reach seems almost alive, as if it were a breathing entity waiting to pounce. . .waiting to viciously engulf him— 

Get up? Now?... Now?... Now? Aaen’s thoughts swirl with fear and unimaginable indecision conflicting with would-be certainty in the chilling moment while the growls grow louder, the chill more pervasive. Every moment stretches into an eternity as he wrestles with the terror of being discovered—or worse, being hunted

The silence of space is a cruel trickster, a void where every sound is magnified and every whisper of the unknown becomes a cacophony of worsening, chilling fear. Aaen fumbles for his communicator, his voice shakes as he again calls out, “Is anyone there?” The only response is a haunting, unforgiving static, the universe itself mocking his desperation.

WHERE THE HECK IS THAT THING? he wonders, his mind racing as he battles the agonizing choice between hiding and exposing himself. His thoughts are a tempest of survival instincts, adrenaline, and mounting dread.

Suddenly, a monstrous and commanding voice cuts through the oppressive silence: “IS SOMEONE THERE?” Aaen’s blood runs cold as a face emerges from the darkness, a grotesque, demonic specter that sends him into a frenzy.

In a split second of terror and instinct, Aaen fired blindly into the void, his movements fueled by raw fear. He races towards the distant twin metal doors, each step a desperate sprint away from the lurking menace. The hunt is on, and Aaen is both prey and predator in a relentless chase through the cold expanse of space.

Aaen silently, frantically desired for his ship. But what happened to his crew? The chilling soberness of the separation and isolationist anxiety while evading what could only so far be quantified as a monster—

But where was the rest of the crew? The last time he saw them was in that corridor, then one turn later, seemingly vanishing from sight. 

Are they alive? Are they lost and disoriented like me? His communicator only produced static. Maybe it was just damaged? He would have to figure something out. Instinct demanded he regroup. If there as static, then that means he could receive transmissions, and perhaps there as still a chance of transmitting? The need to survive demanded that he had to assume as much. . . IS SOMEONE THERE?” Aaen’s blood ran ice cold as a face emerges from the darkness, a grotesque specter that would undoubtedly send him into another frenzy amid violent, excruciating heart palpitations. He had to stay focused and alert. . .what time is it? He had lost track in a strange sense of unpleasant, focus.

Static continued with intermittently minute clicking and crackling sounds. . .what is that? He wondered, keeping his rifle up with his other hand, steadily, cautiously walking backwards, his trigger finger firmly pressed on the rifle's trigger...he could fire at any moment! The rifle felt like it had the weight of a shuttle, yet, despite his arm's trembling, he somehow managed to keep it up and and in front of him.

IS SOMEONE THERE?” . . . More static and distortion. . .

“. . .Captain. . .is that you, sir?”

More eerie noise from the distance. . .seemingly becoming atmospheric— Aaen focused on the voice coming through his communicator. Even a distorted voice is welcomed—

“Ops? Where are you?!”

“Yeah, I just had a brush with that thing—whatever it is!” a deep, terrified gasp.

“What can you tell me?”

“It's big! It took a swipe for my jugular. I barley dodged the attack, and I think I landed a rifle shot near it's shoulder - if that was it's shoulder. It missed my jugular, but it tore my uniform near my neck. . .doesn't look like it broke the skin. . . My tac-light shined on what appeared to be a face - if that's what they call a face. Goodness! It looks like some kind of an animal-machine hybrid—like it's somehow manufactured. It's unlike anything I think The Union has encountered,” an absurd giggling and laughter ensued.

Aaen felt a deep need to help keep one of his crew focused and alert, “Could be,” Aaen granted, “Where are you?”

“Good question, Cap. From what I can tell, this station seems completely without power. No idea what's happened to the Odyssey. I haven't heard from the rest of the crew; don't even know if they're still alive or whatnot. How are you holding up?”

“I was about to ask you the same thing. I had a run-in with that thing, too. Not sure what to make of it. No idea how it's getting around so easily. It seems more intent on trying to scare me than cause physical harm, though it's doing a bang-up job in other regards. I don't have any physical injuries so far, though one can only wonder what that thing's intent really is. How are you holding up? Can you give me some idea of your twenty?”

Uh, Cap!” Aaen heard unquestionable fear in Ops' voice…“CAP! HELP!” Ops' screams pierced the hungry darkness beyond. 

Aaen commanded, “Ops! Run! Evade at all costs!” the only sound sounded like running. .scuffling—

Seconds later, the sounds became sharper. . .Ops sounded out of breath—

“Ops! Sound off!”

The only sound was heavy, seemingly panic-ridden breathing…hyperventilation— An obscenely loud BANG, seemingly instantly followed by a wild flurry of particle weapon fire.

“Ops! Come in!. . .Report!” . . . “Sound off!” . . .

The line filled with a disturbing blend of static and sharp, heavy, panic-ridden breathing—

“OPS!”

The line filled with sharp, random bursts of clicking sounds amid deep, disturbing swells of seeming radio-like static variably drowning out the panic-ridden breathing still audibly coming through. . .then what sounded like faintly-intelligible praying. . .

Aaen snapped to check behind him in the direction in which he walked, then sharply panned back around, his hands still trembling—

The rifle's flashlight began noticeably blinking in and out. . .

“OPS!” Aaen's voice carried through the corridor; he continued along the echo's path.

Deeply anxious, sharply-panicked breathing and variable static and other seemingly miscellaneous noise continued while Aaen felt back into hard metal; startled, he snapped around to find a bulkhead and twin metal doors marked ARMORY - BETA”; the label partially forcibly scratched off, and the doors were hanging eerily crooked as though by some awesome physical force - or so he assumed.

Prying the doors apart without the appropriate tools would prove arguably futile; he didn't want to risk being the corridor - arguably more so in the open - any longer than he had to. 

His heart pounding with anxiety, Aaen took a step back from the doors' reinforced control panel, which would require more inputs for access than he undoubtedly had available, Aaen dialed the power output a few beeping powers higher - the rifle briefly hummed confirmation of the higher voltage setting - then took expert aim at the control panel, and FIRED! 

The rifle sharply recoiled in Aaen's hand and the control panel violently exploded into a violent fireball with excruciatingly hot sparks shooting into the corridor as he shielded his face with his communicator-wielding arm. 

The door's locks audibly disengaged and then the doors firmly parted with a firm metallic CLANG

Rifle-up, Aaen sharply entered, swiftly, checking the corners high and low, in a full-circle. 

—Clear

The eerie, spine chilling sounds coming through the communicator continued. . .the sounds changed from a milder scuffle-like barrage. . .then something slamming HARD into a hard object. . .what sounded like glass breaking. . .

The armory proved empty; Aaen's gut sank as he wiped his sweat-ridden forehead with his communicator arm. 

“Ops?” Aaen called. . .no response. . .then the sound of what Aaen guessed was a desk or a fixture breaking came through. . .

A thundering BANG shook the air; Aaen jumped where he was and turned in the direction of the sound, shining his rifle's light on the door. . .the two-inch carbon-steel door had a near-three-inch dent from what looked like a metal-like blunt fist! 

WHAT-THE—!

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August 22, 2024

The Depths - Part 16

Far from his command deck, fighting through the gripping, disorienting panic. . . The corridor around him proved an abyss of darkness with only the narrow beam of his tactical flashlight piercing the otherwise impenetrable blackness. The unsettling growls reverberated through the corridor, a chilling reminder of the unthinkable peril stalking him. 

Aaen’s breaths come in frantic gasps, each inhalation a struggle against his racing heart and the overwhelming sense of impending doom. His rifle feels like a fragile lifeline, shaking in his trembling hands. The darkness beyond the flashlight’s reach seems almost alive, as if it were a breathing entity waiting to pounce. . .waiting to viciously engulf him— 

Get up? Now?... Now?... Now? Aaen’s thoughts swirl with fear and unimaginable indecision conflicting with would-be certainty in the chilling moment while the growls grow louder, the chill more pervasive. Every moment stretches into an eternity as he wrestles with the terror of being discovered—or worse, being hunted

The silence of space is a cruel trickster, a void where every sound is magnified and every whisper of the unknown becomes a cacophony of worsening, chilling fear. As Aaen fumbles for his communicator, his voice shakes as he again calls out, “Is anyone there?” The only response is a haunting, unforgiving static, the universe itself mocking his desperation.

WHERE IS THAT THING? he wonders, his mind racing as he battles the agonizing choice between hiding and exposing himself. His thoughts are a tempest of survival instincts, adrenaline, and mounting dread.

Suddenly, a monstrous and commanding voice cuts through the oppressive silence: “IS SOMEONE THERE?” Aaen’s blood runs cold as a face emerges from the darkness, a grotesque specter that sends him into a frenzy.

In a split second of terror and instinct, Aaen fired blindly into the void, his movements fueled by raw fear. He races towards the distant twin metal doors, each step a desperate sprint away from the lurking menace. The hunt is on, and Aaen is both prey and predator in a relentless chase through the cold expanse of space.

Aaen silently, frantically desired for his ship. But what happened to his crew? The chilling soberness of the separation and isolationist anxiety while evading what could only so far be quantified as a monster—

But where was the rest of the crew? The last time he saw them was in that corridor, then one turn later, seemingly vanishing from sight. 

Are they alive? Are they lost and disoriented like himself? His communicator only produced static. Maybe it was just damaged? He would have to figure something out. Instinct demanded he regroup. If there as static, then that means he could receive transmissions, and perhaps there as still a chance of transmitting? The need to survive demanded that he had to assume as much. . . IS SOMEONE THERE?” Aaen’s blood ran cold as a face emerges from the darkness, a grotesque specter that would undoubtedly send him into a frenzy. 

Static continued with intermittently minute clicking and crackling sounds. . .what is that? He wondered, keeping his rifle up with his other hand, steadily, cautiously walking backwards, his trigger finger firmly pressed on the rifle's trigger...he could fire at any moment!

IS SOMEONE THERE?” . . . More static and distortion. . .

“. . .Captain. . .is that you, sir?”

More eerie noise from the distance. . .seemingly becoming atmospheric— Aaen focused on the voice coming through his communicator. Even a distorted voice is welcomed—

“Ops? Is that you?”

“Yeah, I just had a brush with that thing—whatever it is!”

“What can you tell me?”

“It's big! It took a swipe for my jugular. I barley dodged the hit, and I think I landed a rifle shot near it's shoulder. It missed my jugular, but it tore my uniform near my neck. . .doesn't look like it broke the skin. . . My tac-light shined on what appeared to be a face. It looks like some kind of an animal-machine hybrid—like it's somehow manufactured. It's unlike anything I think The Union has encountered,”

“Could be,” Aaen granted, “Where are you?”

“Good question, Cap. From what I can tell, this station seems completely without power. No idea what's happened to the Odyssey. I haven't heard from the rest of the crew; don't even know if they're still alive or whatnot. How are you holding up,”

“I was about to ask you the same thing. I had a run-in with that thing, too. Not sure what to make of it. It seems more intent on trying to scare me than cause physical harm, though it's doing a bang-up job in other regards. I don't have any physical injuries so far, though one can only wonder what that thing's intent really is. How are you holding up? Can you give me some idea of your twenty?”

…“Uh, Cap!” Aaen heard unquestionable fear in Ops' voice…“CAP! HELP!” Ops' screams pierced the hungry darkness beyond. 

Aaen commanded, “Ops! Run! Evade at all costs!” the only sound sounded like running. .scuffling—

Seconds later, the sounds became sharper. . .Ops sounded out of breath—

“Ops! Sound off!”

The only sound was heavy, seemingly panic-ridden breathing…hyperventilation—

“Ops! Come in!. . .Report!” . . . “Sound off!” . . .

The line filled with a disturbing blend of static and sharp, heavy, panic-ridden breathing—

“OPS!”

The line filled with sharp, random bursts of clicking sounds amid deep, disturbing swells of seeming radio-like static variably drowning out the panic-ridden breathing still audibly coming through. . .then what sounded like faintly-intelligible praying. . .

Aaen snapped to check behind him in the direction in which he walked, then sharply panned back around, his hands still trembling—

The rifle's flashlight began noticeably blinking in and out. . .

“OPS!” Aaen's voice carried through the corridor. 

Deeply anxious, sharply-panicked breathing and variable static and other seemingly miscellaneous noise continued while Aaen felt back into hard metal; startled, he snapped around to find a bulkhead and twin metal doors marked ARMORY”. 

Prying the doors apart without the appropriate tools would prove arguably futile; he didn't want to risk being the corridor - arguably more so in the open - any longer than he had to. 

His heart pounding with anxiety, Aaen took a step back from the doors' reinforced control panel, which would require more inputs for access than he undoubtedly had available, Aaen dialed the power output a few beeping powers higher - the rifle briefly hummed confirmation of the higher voltage setting - then took expert aim at the control panel, and FIRED! 

The rifle sharply recoiled in Aaen's hand and the control panel violently exploded into a violent fireball with excruciatingly hot sparks shooting into the corridor as he shielded his face with his communicator-wielding arm. 

The door's locks audibly disengaged and then the doors firmly parted with a firm metallic CLANG

Rifle-up, Aaen sharply entered, swiftly, checking the corners high and low, in a full-circle. 

—Clear

The eerie, spine chilling sounds coming through the communicator continued. . .the sounds changed from a milder scuffle-like barrage. . .then something slamming HARD into a hard object. . .what sounded like glass breaking. . .

The armory proved empty; Aaen's gut sank as he wiped his sweat-ridden forehead with his communicator arm. 

“Ops?” Aaen called. . .no response. . .then the sound of what Aaen guessed was a desk or a fixture breaking came through. . .

A thundering BANG shook the air; Aaen jumped where he was and turned in the direction of the sound, shining his rifle's light on the door. . .the two-inch carbon-steel door had a near-three-inch dent from what looked like a metal-like blunt fist! 

WHAT-THE—!

*****

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August 15, 2024

The Depths - Part 15

And they say the only easy day was yesterday, Admiral Call coldly thought from his center seat, recalling what he had just been told, sharply asking, “Are you serious? When was the last time we heard from the Odyssey?


The long-range communications officer gave her a particularly steely, concerned look. 


UNKNOWN LOCATION

Aaen landed sharply on the deck floor, struggling to control his panicked hyperventilating, ignoring his aching back and extremities while at the same time, he sharply panned his barrel-mounted tactical flashlight back and forth along the width of the corridor. He was sure he was going to have more than a handful of bruises, though toggling fight-or-flight nearly dominated his thoughts as he fretted for his physical safety - even his life. His chest felt deeply heavy with pressing anxiety—a grizzly, monstrous growl barreled down the corridor, reverberating off the neighboring bulkheads and giving Aaen excruciating goosebumps; his hands shaking from fear of seemingly imminent death; his grip on his rifle uneasy, causing the light to tremble. There was no telling what the heck was beyond, deep in the pitch-black darkness beyond the light's 15-foot reach...


Get up? Now?...Now?...Now? Aaen' questioned...What if it's out there?... What if it's behind me? Oh, shoot!


The eerie, chilly silence proved heart-wrenchingly deafening—


Aaen sharply scrambled to retrieve his communicator...his voice achingly shaking as he lighting-fast asked “Is anyone there?”...moderate, haunting, prickly static...Aaen struggled to hold the rifle up with his left hand while he struggled to keep the communicator microphone within readable distance of his mouth... Aaen couldn't help but fret and wonder in terror, 'WHERE IS THAT THING?' the only sounds were his rapid, heavy breathing, and the subtle, metallic shaking of the rifle's framework,“...Is anyone there?” The adrenaline couldn't mask some new impact pains that already proved more than noticeable— Aaen's heart nearly exploded out of his chest as he struggled to decide whether to get up or hide; getting up seemed the most immediate way to expose his presence where he seemed hidden - at least for the moment; hiding seemed the only practically desirable action, though nowhere seemed feasible; like a large round marble rolling around in his head, his thoughts gravitated to another appealing option which he struggled to focus on as he strained to calm himself...this was unreal!— “Is anyone there?”

He sensed a presence inching closer...imagining things...? He questioned...yet, something chillingly felt imminent—


loud, blood-curdling monstrous voice pierced the darkness IS SOMEONE THERE?”


Suddenly from some pitch-black darkness mere feet away to his right, that voice and a face!— IS SOMEONE THERE?” 


SHOCKED, Aaen snapped, scrambling to get up while violently swinging the rifle around, the voice disappeared backward into the darkness, Aaen frantically firing in the face's direction. 


WHAT THE HECK? Aaen ran as hard as he could in the backward direction, holding the rifle at a shaky low-ready, focusing on getting to the large twin metal doors seemingly miles away amid helpless thoughts of being chased...hunted...


*****

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April 25, 2024

The Depths - Part 14

"Still nothing from the Odyssey, sir," 

Vice Admiral Pedretti took a stiffly deep breath, "When was their last check-in?" 

The young lieutenant fresh out of OCS expertly fingered through an ocean of data, formulated his response, then answered accurately. 

Another stiffly deep breath from the Vice Admiral, then he continued, "Okay--divert the Voyager and the asset to their last known coordinates; search pattern Alpha-Alpha-Zero-Five." 

The lieutenant expertly acknowledged and carried out his orders. 

Pedretti determinedly beamed at the surrounding displays, realizing what the mountains of metadata pouring in were telling him. . . What-the-heck is going on? 

  *****

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